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PostSubject: Evie   Sun Jun 19, 2011 5:35 pm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Basic Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Name: Evie

Alias: Lann (A male nickname she goes by whenever she is hiding her identity)

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Race: Rem Lorient

Class: Knight

Rank: -

Sexual Orientation: Bi

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Family Members(Optional): Unknown

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Extra Information: Rem Lorients are somewhat of their own race, though they are nearly identical to humans. They supposedly were also once humans in time, but eventually branched off, and became their own race. Although they are identical to humans, their overall appearance compared to their skill in combat can easily make one question whether they are human or not. Evie for example. She is a deadly fighter, she has great strength and speed. The armor she wears gives her the appearance of a male. Rem Lorients, although small in stature, are very skilled, and are capable of surpassing the skill of a human, although not showing it. Including in strength, and speed. Though not by to much, it is still something unique that they hold close.

Rem Lorient are actually a race from long, long ago. The majority of them had been killed off because of their differences. Such as a rather little girl of their race beating a fully grown man in an arm wrestle. Although their differences are not to noticeable, it was enough to create hostile actions towards them. The majority of them were killed off, being supposed "creations of the devil", because of their solid colored eyes. Those with bright colors were killed off first, but those with darker colors remained hidden for quite some time, until caught. The race was thought to be extinct for hundreds of years. and as time went on, it was soon forgotten about. But few still remain, hidden either in the crowds, or isolated far from civilization. The race itself is lost in time. It's existence is only known to few, and those few who only have the money, or access to great knowledge. Because of their strange eyes, and different race, many paladins slew them, mistaking them for demons. Because of this, Rem Lorient aren't to kind to the paladins.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Appearance~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Appearance: Evie in her basic outfit, without armor on:

Although she appears sweet and innocent on the outside, she is very skilled and is not afraid fo slicing down those who stand in her way. Because of her actual appearance, she wears her full body armor, giving off the appearance of a guy. As well as how her voice deepens when her helmet is on, making it sound as if she was a rather light voiced man. Though when the armor is off, she is her normal self.



Evie with her equipment on:





Height: 5'4, with armor, 5'7 - 6 ft

Weight: 130lb

Body Type: Small

Extra Feature: Evies eyes are not that of a human. The eyes are the main feature of which people tell apart the humans, and the Rem Lorient. It's hard to tell from afar, but when people get close enough it become noticeable that Evie's eyes are all black. As if the pupil had covered up the iris. Solid colored eyes such as hers was apart of the reason the Rem Lorient are rare.

Voice: Without her armor on, her voice is rather lite. Very soft and gentle. With her armor on, her voice is muffled slightly by her head piece, giving off the sound of a lite voiced younger man. As well as how she might act with it on, all in order to hide her identity.

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Chain Hook

A Chain Hook is a reusable piece of equipment that is useful in nearly any situation. The Chain Hook is a very long chain, with a large claw on the end that immediately grips whatever it touches, digging the sharp claws into them, making it hold on tightly. At the base, there is a handle you hold, and is used to launch the claw using a small amount of gunpowder. Enough to efficiently project the claw with the chain attached, but not enough to be dangerous to the user, so long as they are wearing protective armor. Once the claw has gripped the designated spot, the user may use their own body weight and strength to attempt to hold the target down, knock them over, or pull them.

Small Bomb

A small bomb that's shaped like a ball, and fits in the palm of the hand. The majority of the bomb is just a solid casing, while the explosion all comes from a small opening in the center. To activate the bomb, there is a small lever that is rather hard to push down, and uses a spring force to prevent it from being pressed accidentally. When it is pushed, the spring will push it back up, and cause the other end of the lever to slam down, which creates a spark big enough to activate the bomb, giving the user 5 seconds to throw it. The explosion isn't insanely big, but is enough to greatly wound someone if they were to be hit by this directly. Evie carries around 5 of these on her at all times, located inside of a pouch.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Persona~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Personality: Evie is a rather "cute" person. Or so people say. Because of her small stature, and gentle appearance. She is very kind to those she cares about, but is shy around those she doesn't know. WHen her identity is hidden beneath her armor, she is usually quiet, and straight forward. Going by the name Lann, she acts similar to the way a guy would at times.

Likes: Cute things, fashion, weapons

Dislikes: Few paladins, few demons

Goals: Unknown

Fears: Unknown. Evie is a big stunt devil, and risk taker.

Strength: Both great strength, as well as speed. Insanely skilled at dual-wielding weapons, especially swords. Her attacks are speedy, and in the battlefield, enemies are left breathless at her seemingly non-stop whirlwind of slashes and thrusts. Her senses are that of a very, very skilled fighter. Higher then average due to her full helmet.

Weakness: Evies defenses aren't perfect. Due to carrying two swords, and not using a shield, she has less defense then an average knight who chooses a shield to aid them. Because she takes many risks, she often gets hurt easily. So long as she gets the job done, it doesn't bother her.

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~History~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

History: Evie was born in the far east. she was adopted into a noble family as a baby, and she never knew her true parents. They had abandoned her as a baby. Because she was adopted, her real last name is unknown, but she had taken her adopted parents last names, being Leonhardt. She grew up as a regular child in the noble family, forced to act like a perfect little girl. Though as she was growing up, she took a high interest in combat, after seeing the family guards training grounds, and barracks. She'd always hang around the guards, and watch them have their spars together. Secretly, at the age of 5, she began training, using just 2 sticks she found. She used 2 sticks because it felt more comfortable to her, considering she had nothing to use as a shield, and soon just adapted to the style over time. By the age of 8, she was already mimicking the soldiers techniques, and body movements. She was also able to out muscle some of the older men in the household, which began to draw the attention of her foster parents. They expected Evie to act like a perfect little girl. Violence was never suppose to be apart of her life, according to them. Knowing that they can no longer just slowly mold the perfect little girl, they turned to strictly punishing her for every little mistake she made, such as making mistakes when company is over, or even as much as not doing something she was never told to do. They turned to physical punishment for many things. Spanking, smacking, anything they could think of to forcefully mold her into what they see "perfect". Though what they didn't know, is that all this was doing was creating fear in her, making her more and more afraid of her foster parents. As well as sparking a flame of anger inside of her. This continued until she was the age 15. Countless numbers of punishment, and physical abuse. For the past few years, she managed to slip away and continue to practice her combat skills, until one night where her father had caught her on her way out, with 2 of the guards practice swords held in her arms. Her foster fathers reaction to this was to grab Evie by her hair, which was easily done because of the difference in height, and pull her back to her room for punishment. Evie tried to force back, feeling her hair nearly rip out in his large hands, she eventually lost her balance, and fell forward, only to accidentally lunge the tip of a sword she had been holding through her fathers back. This of course, killed her father.

Not knowing what to do, Evie immediately ran off with tears rolling down her face. With her foster father dead by her own hands, she knew she couldn't return to her family, so she ran away, and stayed gone for nearly a year, in hiding. Using what money she still had under her name, which was a fairly large amount, she had an armor set crafted by an armorsmith, and kept her name as "Anonymous". She made sure to tell him it were to be a set for a female, but as good of a blacksmith as he was, he got 2 orders confused, and created a male set for her instead. Instead of telling him to redesign it, which she could have easily done, she sort of liked the look to it, and accepted it as it was. Not only was this man a good black smith, but he also had knowledge of the Rem Lorient, and had a book on their pat in his storage. He recognized Evies eyes the day she arrived, and knew what she was immediately. Though unlike most people, rather then turning her into the officials, he gave her shelter for nearly a year, as well as taught her everything he knew about her kind. This of which was a big surprise to Evie, knowing that nearly all of her kind are dead. Though after hearing it all, she became proud that she was a Rem Lorient, and wears her race with dignity. After staying with the blacksmith for about a year, she decided to depart one day, and begin traveling the world just out of curiosity. The blacksmith gave her a lot of advice, but one piece of advice was greater then the rest. "Whatever you do..do NOT remove your helmet around a paladin...it will be the death of you". As Evie departed, she decided to keep her identity hidden. The suit of armor worked out pretty well, it tricked people easily into thinking she was a male, as well as her voice being somewhat muffled under the helmet.

From there on, Evie began traveling. Fighting off thugs, and groups of people who thought they were tough enough to defeat a lone knight on the roads. After a while of traveling, she came across a order of Knights who titled themselves as "The Crimson Army". They weren't big shots or anything, mostly just a band of people who tried to do good for those around them. They wore ragtag armor sets that looked as if they were made from tinfoil. When they caught eye of Evie, they immediately wanted her to join their group, after learning she had no affiliation with any lords. Evie agreed to join their group, but she only hung around for a few months, before the group disbanded. The members of the group were convinced Evie was a young male, but had either battle marks, or scars beneath her armor, due to the reason she never removed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Evie   Mon Jun 20, 2011 2:59 am

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PostSubject: Re: Evie   Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:20 pm

The application looks great, but there are two things I am not sure about.

1. The not being human thing, that is something that I am not sure that it is allowed.

2. The whole bomb thing, we aren't allowed guns in this RP, so I am not sure about bombs.

These are just things that make me unsure, as thus I'll leave it to Adam to decide.

Other than that, it is an amazing app, good work
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PostSubject: Re: Evie   Mon Jun 20, 2011 5:07 pm

Well i remember someone being an elf here, just still ranked as a human, though they were an elf. So i decided to try something like that.

And for the bomb thing, i know guns aren't allowed either, but bombs like this are usually used in times liek this, maybe not to often though i guess because of the risk of easily hurting yourself with them. I'll wait to see what someone else says about them
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PostSubject: Re: Evie   Mon Jun 20, 2011 5:15 pm

I second Payton's Reasoning, I see no reason why gunpowder wouldn't be accepted. And besides bombs were used in medevil times to uproot walls and stuff 8D


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PostSubject: Re: Evie   Mon Jun 20, 2011 5:30 pm

Alright, but to answer the elf thing, it is never said that they were an elf, it is said that they believed that she was an elf.

I know that gunpowder is used in the medieval times, but what I am wondering is if Adam has a problem with it, so to that I'll say we consult Adam about that.

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PostSubject: Re: Evie   Mon Jun 20, 2011 5:34 pm

I'll just continue on as if I'm approved for now, and PM this to Adam and see what he thinks about it.

Also, usually when you have pointy ears, and people think your an elf....your an elf..lol. Saying your not, and people just think you are, is just a way of bending around limits ETC
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