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Sebastian
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PostSubject: Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor)   Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor) Icon_minitimeFri Jun 10, 2011 9:01 pm

Ability Name: Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor)

Ability Family: Blood/Transformation

Duration/Cooldown: For every 1 post He must wait for 2 turns once he de-activates this ability. This does not apply to passives.

He can use this ability up to 10 posts; in which he is forcebly changed back into what he normally was or he will rend himself appart.

ability Effect:

Active: Sebastian's flesh ripples and a pair of size appropriate blood red raven wings burst out of his back. His head begins to change into a hybrid of a hell hound and a demonic raven with seven eyes on each side. His tail grows an enormous barb that begins at the crown of the skull that is embedded in his tail. His Claws become wreathed in blood energy and his mouth constantly leaks a dark acidic energy that is acidic to flesh. His abilities in real world combat are now enhanced dramatically; however this is just a portion of what the true ability itself could do. (When sebastian uses this ability in the Dream world; his nightmare ability is enhanced instead of his body since it is already technically inside of the person's mind. Since this is only minor the ability increase in nightmare is only slightly better[10-15%])

Passive:
Sebastian has an affinity with Ravens and crows that trancend normal barriers. They Treat him as one of their own flock and will often just sit on one of his spikes. He can communicate with them as he can communicate with Canines and with those that Speak Human or Demonic tongue.

Ability Technique: Sebastian lets loose a howl of wretched origins that tears the very fabric of his existance apart. He Endures pain like no other as he draws a bleeding symbol on the ground that resonates with hatred and agony of the foulest sort. The ability starts at his claws and eventually works it's way all over his body for the change.

Cons:
This form changes sebastian dramatically; there is a chance that he could be changed into the creature permantly. This would degrade mind body and soul into something that would would seek to destroy everything that it is not familiar with. It can also cause death or even a displacement onto another plane. It can also rip the soul out of his own body and cause him to be what would be refered to as a Ghost or Wraith.


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PostSubject: Re: Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor)   Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor) Icon_minitimeSat Jun 11, 2011 6:36 am

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his mouth constantly leaks a dark acidic energy that eats at the very floor beneath him.

hmm... maybe tone that down a little? If it melts and burns through the ground then it could very well eat through almost anything? That may be a bit much maybe just lower it down a bit?

other than that looks good man.
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Sebastian
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PostSubject: Re: Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor)   Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 12, 2011 8:32 am

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor)   Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 12, 2011 3:58 pm

I think you need a defined limit of how long you can use this one, since it is a battle form. Other than that, I think it is fine
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PostSubject: Re: Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor)   Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 12, 2011 10:32 pm

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor)   Wretched Totem Of The Sanguine Raven(Minor) Icon_minitimeMon Jun 13, 2011 6:35 pm

Alright, this looks good, I give it my approval
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